Question

[Uyêb Lê Minh]

Writing: Modern technology has made life much better for most people in the developed world.

Ideas: Make notes about

*how modern technology can help people with poor mobility

*the amount of free time we have now

*the amount of stress in our lives

*how modern technology develops our skills

Plan: Follow the plan

Paragraph 1:Write an introduction with a clear outline of topic

Paragraph 2: Present the argument in favor of the statement

Paragraph 3: Present the argument against the statement

Paragraph 4: Write a conclusion to the essay. Include your own opinion

Answer 1

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Technology is now a big part of our society and our predictable future. There is little room for people who wish to live without technology, and luckily, it is still advancing at a rate that has helped stave off stagnation. I believe that for every advantage that technology brings us, it also brings us a disadvantage at the same time.

The advantages of the internet are that people can communicate over vast distances and can gain access to information and get answers to their questions very quickly. The disadvantage is that the Internet isn’t moderated in the way that people think and lots of it is filled with misinformation and outright lies.

In conclusion, technology brings about such a lot of advantages. However, it’s people’s duty to use it in an appropriate way to make it beneficial

Answer 2

[Uyêb Lê Minh]

Technology is now a big part of our society and our predictable future. There is little room for people who wish to live without technology, and luckily, it is still advancing at a rate that has helped stave off stagnation. I believe that for every advantage that technology brings us, it also brings us a disadvantage at the same time.

There are some reasons why people say that life with technology has been problema and they would to live without this innovation. First, it is argued that technology has made people physically inactive and prone to develop several diseases. With the help of technology, people use cars and motorbikes to travel, and washing machine and vacuum cleaner to do housework, instead of their physical strength; as a result, the chance of getting disease obesity has been increasingly higher. Moreover, the invention of Internet and devices computers and mobile phones has been followed by the appearance of modern crimes, thus, people’s life may be exposed to a lot of dangers. These days, people using social media Facebook or online service Internet Banking would have a high chance of being stalked and hacked, resulting in the loss of personal information and private property, which may become a nuisance for several users.

However, it is undeniable that human has benefited from technology in several aspects. Thanks to the development of various means of media, it has been easier for people to broaden their minds about the world. It is often said that people could save a great deal of time learning about one country’s culture and history through Internet and other technological devices television and radio, which could not only store a vast amount of information but also could deliver it smoothly with images and sounds.  Furthermore, advanced technology also contributes to the development of healthcare system, which helps doctors detect and cure serious diseases.  In hospitals, brain diseases meningitis now can be easily diagnosed with high technology gadgets CT (Computed Topography) or patients who struggle with breathing now can be supported by a machine called Respiratory Ventilator; as a result, patients’ lives may be improved and prolonged. 

In conclusion, although some problems caused by technology may make human life more complicated, I am convinced that people’s life has been improved significantly thanks to the development of technology in several aspects, including knowledge expansion as well as diseases treatment methods.