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the next vacation I'm giong to Da Lat with my family. Da Lat is called the land of fog. the tour will last 2 days. Our 2 day vacation plan are: the frist day, i'll go for a walk around  the hotel that i rented. i and my sister will  eat the food we like. i and my family will walk along the path to enjoy the scent of pine, glass and flower. we will  go to the super market buy some special food, tea, coffee ,souvenir or going shopping and many other interesting activities. early in the moring on the last day of vacation, we will go to the Poungour waterfall. water falls from a height of nearly 40 meters, spread over 100 meters, throght a 7-storey stone stair system. surrounded by a primeval forest with an area of about 2.5 ha with rich and diverse vegetation. the average temparature is from 14 to 23 degree celsius. in the evening we'll  visit our relative. we'll be be back tomorrow morning. i'm excited about the up coming vacation, hopefully the vacation will be as i excited.

Answer 1

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Answer 2

[Lý Huyền Thư]

The next vacation I'm giong to Da Lat with my family. Da Lat is called the land of fog. The tour will last 2 days. Our 2 day vacation plan are: The frist day, I'll go for a walk around  the hotel that I rented. I and my sister will eat the food we . I and my family will walk along the path to enjoy the scent of pine, glass and flower. We will go to the super market buy some special food, tea, coffee ,souvenir or going shopping and many other interesting activities. Early in the moring on the last day of vacation, we will go to the Poungour waterfall. Water falls from a height of nearly 40 meters, spread over 100 meters, throght a 7-storey stone stair system. surrounded by a primeval forest with an area of about 2.5 ha with rich and diverse vegetation. The average temparature is from 14 to 23 degree celsius. In the evening we'll visit our relative. We'll be back tomorrow morning. I'm excited about the up coming vacation, hopefully the vacation will be as I excited.

Chú thích:

Gạch ngang: Bỏ

Gạch chân: Lỗi

Chữa lỗi:

2 day vacation --> two-day vacation

are --> is

frist --> first

We will go to the super market buy some special food, tea, coffee ,souvenir or going shopping and many other interesting activities. --> We will go to the super market to buy some special food, tea, coffee ,souvenirs or going shopping and many other interesting activities. 

hopefully the vacation will be as I excited. --> hopefully the vacation will be as exciting as I expected.

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