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My name is Linh. Someone say that I am so funny, I often want to make everybody laugh so I tell them some fun story. Some friends say I'm kind, too. I often help them, I help them to do their homework.I am freindly, too.I like make friend with everyone who I have met. I'm a confident person. I can talk very confidently in front of many people. That all
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My name is Linh. Someone say =>says that I am so=>quite funny. I often=>bỏ nhé want to make everybody laugh so I tell them some fun story=>stories. Some friends say I'm kind, too because I often help them, I help them to do(vô lí(bỏ) =>with their homework.I am freindly, too.I like make =>making friends with everyone who I have met. I'm a confident person. I can talk very confidently in front of many people. That all.
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